revision essay narrative

Requirements for the revision essay:

*Lowered word count: 1000 – 1100 words. Nothing over 1100 words will be accepted.

Remove and replace one paragraph completely.

Make structural changes and add/replace details throughout the essay.

Make significant changes to either the opening or closing paragraph.

Underline all changes.

Remember: You’re telling a story.

On a separate page, write a paragraph detailing the changes and why you made them. Also, make a detailed outline of the original essay and the revised version.

I will give you the manuscript